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Whereas She of the Wyrmstadt and Princess Celestia of Equestria, desirous of a peaceful end to the bloodshed, make this day this agreement:

Clause 1: No dragon shall hunt or eat a pony

Clause 2: No pony shall hunt and kill a dragon

Clause 3: Any dragon shall permit ponies to maintain their settlements within the his/her territory

Clause 4: No pony shall force a dragon from his/her territory

Clause 5: Dragons shall not hunt or eat any domesticated animals owned and/or bred by ponies

Clause 6: Ponies shall not exercise their magic within a dragon's territory, pony settlements excepted

Clause 7: Ponies shall not control the weather within a dragon's territory, pony settlements excepted

Clause 8: Dragons shall protect their territory from all invaders; this includes ponies

Clause 9: Ponies shall defend their homes from all invaders; this includes dragons

Clause 10: Ponies shall not interfere with the sacred duel of two dragons unless the duel poses a direct threat to a town, settlement or city.

Clause 11: Ponies shall not steal from a dragons horde

Clause 12: Dragons may not use their fire near or around a pony settlement unless permission is given or unless it is requested by the ponies of the settlement

Clause 13: Dragon eggs may not be taken from their nest unless the nest is abandoned.

Clause 14: Dragon duels must be fought away from a pony settlement and be witnessed by an ambassador of the Wyrmstadt.

Clause 15: The Royal Princesses may not interfere with Draconian issues unless it affects ponies or unless it is requested

Clause 16: Ignorance of these laws is not a defence

Anypony or Anydragon who has broken these laws risks severe punishment that shall be decided either by her majesty Princess Celestia of Equestria or She of the Wyrmstadt. To ensure that all ponies and dragons know of these laws they will be posted in schools and taught to all dragons who intend to make their homes in Equestria.

Signed:
Princess Celestia Regent of the Sun
She of the Wrymstadt ruler of Dragons
I asked :icondetermamfidd: if i could make up some of the laws for the treaty in his awesome fan fic It Takes a village so heres what we came up with 1-8 are his laws that he made and 9-15 are the ones i made
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DragonmanX-90 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
Well done man. I like that the two sides did agree to a mutually respectful accord; it shows that though both sides are very different, both look beyond the immediate to the bigger picture. They see what open war between the two species could do and work to curb any possible antagonism, respect one another's traditions and way of life, and simply live side by side. Kinda wish humans could figure that out.

You know something that's always confused me on a small level in regards to this show/fandom: Why isn't "Anyone" used as a catch all term? Admitedly it isn't often there's enough of more than one species in a conversation for it to be necessary, but it seems like it would save time. It's not a problem, just something that I've been thinking about for a bit.
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Darklordcomp Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Human's will never figure it out because as long as we exist as a species we will always want more power. Thats why Communism will never work because no matter what you do Someone will want more power and take over corrupting the government from such a nice little thing into an iron walled Juggernaut
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DragonmanX-90 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
Sad but true in most regards. I keep hoping that as more time passes, we'll outgrow that unfortunate tendency. I mean that kind of ambition has served us as much as it's hurt us.
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Darklordcomp Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It is our nature to want power and to always want more
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:icondragonmanx-90:
DragonmanX-90 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
True that. Maybe at some point we'll figure out how to use that power the right way.
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Darklordcomp Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Meh probably not in our lifetimes
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DragonmanX-90 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Oh that goes without saying. I'm talking the next time we evolve or something.
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Darklordcomp Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Evolve as in burn to ashes in nuclear fire :D
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RedWizzrobe Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012
Blarney Stone: :icontoolongdidntreadplz:
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bugsydor Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi, I just submitted this to the Dragon of Ponyville group in honor of Determamfidd's fic, It Takes a Village.
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Darklordcomp Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice
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stinkysardines Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011
Clause 15, wouldn't that allow Celestia to modify Spike after he asked her to? Needs some clarification there.

(Also these no periods, if I were a grammar Nazi I'd be declaring a Holocaust right now. D8)
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Darklordcomp Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol let me look No He was strong enough to fight his own battles, and the fight was taking place far enough away from ponyville to be considered a threat Celestia wanted spike to win his own battles but thats my take on that if you want to ask the guy who made the story i'd do so also I'll summon up the Allies of ponydom to crush your grammar nazi powers XD
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stinkysardines Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011
That was confusing and annoying to read, but thank you for proving my point; grammar is important. =P
The ambassador brought a dragon magician with the sole reason of insuring that no magics were placed upon either dragon. It sure doesn't seem like he would be fine with Alicorn assistance if Spike would like it. Celestia also also said that she would like to help Spike with her magics, and that her interference would piss the dragons off. (in an earlier chapter)
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Darklordcomp Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol
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tytyvm Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
frekin ah awesome
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Darklordcomp Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks XD
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JFPierre Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Student General Artist
that is a fair treaty
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Darklordcomp Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
celestia is a fair ruler
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JFPierre Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Student General Artist
:nod:
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Darklordcomp Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
XD i was thinking about making this and then i decided hey lets ask him and he was all like hells yes and i was all like ya!
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JFPierre Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Student General Artist
and i'm glad you both did. He may use some of his fanart as canon in his story
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determamfidd Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
I so will! ;)
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JFPierre Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Student General Artist
:icondashomgplz:
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Darklordcomp Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol
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JFPierre Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Student General Artist
XD
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Darklordcomp Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol i can't wait to see spike beat the shit out of razorfang It takes a village is now my favorite fan fic ever! lol
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determamfidd Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
BUCK YEAH! Bam, one treaty!

Thanks so much for writing this, darklordcomp!

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Darklordcomp Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
no problem XD
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